Is this Hermione? I love the sad look on her face and her still big teeth... What scene is it from..?? Love to see it colored as well...

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Always on board on the long and luxurious Ron/Hermione cruise-liner ship....

It's supposed to be Hermione from PoA chap 11. I can easily imagine that Hermione thought about alot of things during that chapter - how to make Harry not get killed (chap 10 is where he overhears what Sirius was judged for), if she should tell McG about the Firebolt or not, and other things.

I think I'm going to colour it when I find my coloured pencils, but right now I even don't have the time to look after dem

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She looks very pensieve but cute too!

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Thanks

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I think it's a nice sketch of Hermione, and I like the originality of your cartoon style, but the way you've *presented* the drawing COULD BE BETTER. You've scanned it (I'm assuming) in a way that has made your drawing look too pale/washed out...and there are bits of yellow in the scan.

If you have atleast a basic photo processing software, you could try to increase the contrast (whilst at the same time making your lines blacker/easier to see), then desaturate the whole picture to get rid of the yellow, and clean up around the lines with a solid eraser brush.

See how clearer it is after fixing it up with Photoshop: [link] , click it to zoom in (I have uploaded that only for you, as it is your art, and I'll take it back down again)

I'm just trying to offer constructive criticism ok ? Please don't kill me..

Heh, no "killing" from me - I completely agree that it's not the best scan in the universe -_-

Unfortunately my scanner doesn't work anymore, and so I had to use my library's. I think I spent two hours just figuring out how to get it in the resolution needed for the project. Horrible scanner, ghdkjs.
But, yeah, it could def need a clean up (though I kind of like that it isn't "black on white". But no yellow would be A+).

Thanks for the comment I'll remember it for the future

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